关灯
《文稿,还能这样写》作者雄文《笔杆子碎语》作者王一端《机关文稿写作入门》作者杨新宇《机关文字工作五十讲》作者何新国
最新《公文写作培训课程》直播间《公文写作百法例讲》作者房立洲老秘网站长、《老秘笔记》作者老猫《公文高手的自我修养》作者胡森林
开启左侧

[交流记录] 《众秘夜思》第2集:列提纲、明思路——8.12晚文字漫谈(端方)

  [复制链接]
于安 发表于 2014-8-18 14:43:43 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式 打印 上一主题 下一主题
 

6 {) Z8 ~6 U$ S% Y" b. A( P line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; u9 Z5 A. |# f8 E, v mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体"> 

" T' Y. I. [$ h: R+ ?: _; e! c / ~3 v2 C M! x8 C1 r( g. H+ I3 L

6 X* J7 ?7 j7 A& \( v mso-char-indent-count:2.0;line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">) q) B& z2 V3 C. q# K4 c( e0 n( i 方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体">8.12% l( L8 ^: _ f1 M8 p1 t9 G font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体">晚文字漫谈——端方

0 d4 z- d- i7 z' K, e9 d$ N9 |) W : ]$ z4 W% `# `

6 a, R( u; n6 A" I mso-char-indent-count:2.0;line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 h+ ~. J1 a* Y" D7 k 楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:, f3 C J8 R8 s3 s O 0pt">(根据文字内容整理)

7 }: j: d9 q% n k( x& V! R. G1 W) J6 q

, {6 R4 U2 \6 s% ?4 o1 V7 Uline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">9 x. _2 `8 o4 ]- w) }; u0 |/ | mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 

9 F0 v5 x2 y# y. W/ Q* f 2 o' T$ U+ j5 s$ D+ C: S

# ? i/ t4 |- i6 {: y5 R line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 C( o4 U. O" E6 ^16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 4 z9 s8 Q: u; C9 {) c- z( E楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">时间:1 z8 T. b" G3 L mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2014/ \- j1 `) P6 f mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">年812

$ {4 A( n, s* g* y" \' I# A+ ^ # Z6 p+ L0 Y# @/ ]1 m

# q3 Y6 B0 @( r0 Z8 x7 Y7 Zline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">: q6 V: V. M$ [0 [0 V2 E16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: $ f8 _( g0 Q7 \楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">地点:0 M& \$ F% W- P6 pmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">老秘网“文稿修改演播室”(QQ群号:366351120

+ s8 m! t* [: ~0 |0 b/ y ) W2 V0 R5 U/ N; {7 D: H& a4 m/ `! N

$ G0 L6 E& b0 |" ?' P4 rline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, w1 p7 c; u# j0 ~+ o 16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:) Q7 g& o6 u& u1 ^, ?% h 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">主讲:" ^/ X0 L. F I mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方

# l0 F/ }, u% V. L% O 4 m3 v& F0 r3 H- p7 N9 {

& G3 C' e. q" @2 K. N+ o V line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">: D+ B! ^( F/ D/ c 16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:) C% N, `7 A2 `0 c 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">整理:8 u _. E8 i( B( n( k: i mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">杨苏

% Q% ~: V6 p2 c( r& i4 P! H, W+ C& S+ v, I1 t) Q

' F9 Z9 i1 V8 {8 M; { ]& B/ i! E1 D line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">" b& Z8 w; L3 L7 G0 h' { 16.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: `8 |8 {7 A" ^( k6 K% K 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">具体内容:

, n) Y2 s& }* w9 u5 o+ | m - b- y/ D2 q `4 Z) O

) z1 B6 x- |# y2 ]( zline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">0 |. U# d$ ^: i6 K# hmso-bidi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 

0 A/ v7 B: f* r. M9 k/ [$ X 7 O# R/ g6 J" H5 h+ z" T

' v) e) D9 `4 D8 A4 U& B% _9 l mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># V5 f7 m/ R' G mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black; + X2 ~$ ?6 S! q, F" V" cmso-font-kerning:0pt">一、对一篇汇报材料的讨论

0 j8 E9 Y A+ W+ i- w9 ]/ R9 O 1 O5 V% |) |/ i6 ]0 X3 b9 ]

9 j- ~; B% y% H7 d. U5 v- J line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">: e/ Z3 W# G, d5 U( M. P; m# a mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 

( {% U- Q3 ?" z5 T 0 Z' ^! I8 K0 d n/ y$ b. Y( d

, f8 _2 k# R, A* ^% }line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' h. q2 Z8 Q. m& Y9 V( P; z font-family:黑体;mso-hansi-font-family:黑体;mso-bidi-font-family:黑体">老猫:某市美丽乡村创建工作情况汇报,大家帮某同学推敲一组标题,如何?

6 p2 H9 W- ~( C( T# A0 w 9 V- ^. A1 w2 c! i+ I Y

) ?7 h' g; t) W* Q" {5 B, q, eline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">% p$ H# X7 O9 ?$ E0 u1 i "Times New Roman"">(一)立足转型强村,打造宜业乡村。

( K& T/ c. ?( T9 z ) u, W7 v% a. V5 b

4 u$ ^$ h9 e2 ?* R% A/ ? line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, I9 X& e5 ~# B. @; S "Times New Roman"">(二)坚持“五水共治”,打造宜人乡村

4 `4 s0 i7 a/ |, y9 _1 I$ ` 0 s9 v$ |/ \& O

, l( r8 U b( e2 d! ]: |: cline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">! v2 y9 D' E' _! n"Times New Roman"">(三)着眼增收致富,打造宜农乡村。

1 R3 x& p" _1 z3 Z5 G: i8 d & Z+ r7 f& W( V' v; ]7 S9 W! D: U4 v

9 H8 W, ]; e" e line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 x" B0 S% s5 L- @# M* \ "Times New Roman"">(四)突出民生保障,打造宜居乡村。

) J) ~+ w# O8 C3 o 9 r* }# c% C1 l3 s+ O

& j! U5 W [4 {. v! C, e( [6 c line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ e1 j4 Q+ x: X- m* d7 V, M# L2 |, J font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;' p1 B$ |, V5 ]! w mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">魅力乡村,幸福乡村、宜居乡村、富裕乡村之类的,我的意思是用一根线串起来,让这组小标题形成一个整体。 l( |! p+ d* Dmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

/ k0 {9 z* H( `6 l0 c/ G" V+ v& R8 _# I- z# t5 \1 A

; @7 ~4 i3 \+ g% r; U4 \* |line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- @* Y( K" w; j6 a14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 7 ]# t0 {! c3 ?7 u7 }4 W( V S楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:& {+ L; j" U4 J' F! ]mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">标题分两部分,前半部分亮手段(做法),后半部分凸显成效。四个乡村的思路不错,但内容上缺少支撑,建议再从内容上面抓取下逻辑。另外,感觉题目不足以体现内容。* _* P5 d9 ^2 t0 V. p mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

O% O R* q: m* G- @ 0 o6 S5 G Y; _, a7 i$ R

- G$ v1 B7 ~8 E3 _7 \% _ line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># J7 V( Y+ ?$ C8 l6 y4 e( X 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 8 c8 @0 N5 L5 y! `/ z! R楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:1 U$ R6 x! ~' J' D% a/ `! J5 a) cmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">嗯,内容来讲有并列的,也有逻辑递进关系,不知如何把握。# T$ }' C' i2 n# p1 {+ n- ]+ P mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

& l+ m7 i# p* l b- f/ j 2 s2 E8 q, v( r4 y1 A K

( V4 P8 f% e8 \" x1 R7 ?+ Y z$ Yline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">3 b9 X3 n$ v3 W14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: " ~" A9 ]3 g0 ~4 u* o. t# G楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">猫老:) ]( b/ x& _6 O+ ?( i' g) H- a1 m cmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">富增收入,美展新颜。7 d G0 S& c2 ]' j! c. i3 E0 Bmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

, E" X4 H. B* \- X7 E! l4 o& ~ , s( c7 F' B7 G" H' q

) j2 ~1 b/ f; y. H/ y4 r2 ~: m line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, k4 C( o: F( M* j1 z3 J14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:) g* t/ x* ^$ ` 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">霞光:) l- N0 X7 j8 n# Q. E mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">民生保障作为出发点,惠农增收作为增长点呢0 @& R$ o8 c2 W' F v mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,4 q3 `1 b2 G2 e; f4 j) ]% G14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:; N: ?3 N' P$ L+ p6 A1 r 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">妥否% z6 r% ^ O* G4 `mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">?

# `0 C! p; W P4 z" O2 ~- p2 y 8 ]! i7 F0 F1 A+ d$ u9 p" w

5 ^- U/ E% q1 k2 b( P: H# _: C line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 Y* M5 c# Z# X* |14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: ( s# S2 ]3 u. q! n2 F; h/ O# }楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">杨苏:( g+ d3 H0 r& X9 e3 y. ^1 G5 @) Tmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">感觉民生保障包括很多方面,不只是宜居。宜居一般是和生态环境放在一起的,民生保障一般和和谐、幸福搭配在一起。. G o7 K$ }& \4 f5 P mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

) A8 c% m4 E2 j; w8 R' H+ q' a6 q) m3 ^0 i2 y3 t9 Y% w

% v6 B- c$ f r4 F+ P line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">. k, `8 k) ]# A* D" P14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: & H' L+ W% T5 [# B/ q6 m楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬30度:( O( |3 `! x" J3 m& ]! w! G mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">顺序调整一下,环境放最后。不知道第一点内容。7 n1 Z+ o/ W8 A* V2 zmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

! c3 n, ?; V' ^, [. O% E' v: X0 N . ]7 D7 G) Z( G4 w

& p# k4 _5 X0 A" j) Wline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">3 Y }# c; F' L% u8 { 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: ; I5 ]) h. ~' k* G5 I/ R楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:7 x0 g* z) [7 `4 g# N3 W% J9 amso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">整个提纲是这样子的:* y- w7 k- c" g: omso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

+ C2 g- e1 i9 r* g" Q& J " U6 z( p# ?1 V' J, E4 d; ]! [

/ B% U! a' U5 y3 c9 H line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, i, T$ {0 l9 Q, S8 I宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一、三任书记接力干,一张蓝图抓创建. R' l( v( p- k, A& P font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; & f- j4 C4 q, [+ c% {! amso-font-kerning:0pt">

, ^' a* X8 e, u- ~, a4 i; I; s : B( `5 g4 J# n) g- i7 K6 u

) g$ y. U m. V9 A/ X( e7 m4 | line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">5 X0 G" @7 u% R+ m8 Y3 n+ K 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">1( p8 Z5 {0 Q. M& }0 ` 仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: ( ~" E7 f1 i8 ?7 I7 ?宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、一以贯之谋创建。# ]9 \% f/ a6 E% U. \7 ]( N# c 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

, A" A$ w, n7 {. T% H' y8 S5 | 6 V$ S) Q( }& Q n0 p

5 t3 _+ F/ O8 iline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">3 U" I# \. [; z+ s% X! ~$ Y1 J$ w 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2" r8 q( f: o2 o( N& r1 H6 w仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:/ A" u7 U' F; P 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、规划引领明方向。) U& p6 j* C% `# d# j0 e 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

& G7 X' X8 z; [, F9 _2 a$ L3 e( F' L- {5 b

, J* v8 f2 H$ ]2 _$ d$ P5 _' Cline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; s8 [" o7 \) {# }! H8 i9 N 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">31 U" h/ L& W1 v' d仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: ! Z V" @! x! _5 J: t宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、政策支撑强保障。3 ~' X- i+ e& i/ a5 Z$ ]+ i) w仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

# ^2 P& b, t/ \+ A& l# V + T* K# i! v: I0 z$ [" k

: K. d/ ~- w, q4 G* d% [9 {$ [ line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># @% j' V. I8 v: |0 ~! Q0 T 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">41 G7 n5 Q+ t, o! F5 |6 N仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family: ; F$ Q5 f" [6 v8 H8 g宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、健全机制促落实。4 o9 z% x: u3 X; U" Y0 q 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

4 @( L% V" u3 x, U7 `) \2 m 3 s* A$ N9 [ f# R: ~' ]$ j

3 s5 D: Y: u6 ?, Lline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">+ p' R' P( R7 Y1 `9 B" t7 [/ K宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">二、十年时间抓整治,美丽乡村显成效5 A7 I2 z; z6 Q J font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; 6 y' s$ C+ x$ [9 Nmso-font-kerning:0pt">

/ E7 q2 Q: Z3 _3 B; } " I+ c* H8 C, X+ ~ A

) e- l; @* L$ |* xline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' m1 n' ?3 I9 A, \+ p( T- N$ Z宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(一)坚持把转型强村作为美丽乡村建设的3 b! |8 Y, s' `! i: F- c font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;- \7 H0 ?% U" y: Y k mso-font-kerning:0pt">“. h/ N5 F/ J G6 ~& ]$ a4 n. Q8 F mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">重头戏$ d; D7 G$ N# w: p% f- w5 {! n; H. qfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; * J5 O4 @6 Q7 z/ h1 {1 K4 ?; |& q% zmso-font-kerning:0pt">” U) e% X4 x1 k* C+ l) p mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,乡村发展水平有效提升。- U; P. }0 h$ p/ c2 H font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;1 n, o2 W8 [7 } mso-font-kerning:0pt">

& K$ i! [5 \" E! w0 | * l0 h" Y& {' ?2 d2 D. L4 \

$ c E9 }* F" X& ^9 Z6 G line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">& i1 _% C0 V; k( }/ W 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    1. c% ]4 B; Y X+ K7 }宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、依靠主体强动力。! x l ~: R& ]" O( C1 cfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; + Z9 p7 L" k* E9 c4 Umso-font-kerning:0pt">

5 K- @9 K3 Z4 E5 I$ N, q5 ^# c m W

6 E4 G5 G* @+ ?& H$ A1 u line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">6 T8 m& u+ Y! j仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    2" [! C/ P, {' S* F5 g- s( R宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、产村联动促增收。6 x; U: |: ~" `3 V9 y1 O' W font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; + `& r5 _- b2 v2 H# W, [1 ^mso-font-kerning:0pt">

8 R" ~$ m: E) W o6 L * a% P% X- j3 t

% s! F* p8 S+ j9 J! mline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">! O$ u& u0 Z& u2 f; Z4 \* @仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    3/ l1 ^( O6 q' u9 y宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、突出重点建项目。 @( p2 u& D- q- X2 i, \# Y7 a$ E, d' A font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; 8 ? G5 b/ p3 H, v0 p1 L/ Jmso-font-kerning:0pt">

# ^5 \" o) s& _5 Z * Z" H4 w9 g4 ^

) v+ E6 {" }$ ^, `6 [ line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, t) Q: Z. F# \: e 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">  ( P' p m N4 p* A0 Y8 A宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(二)坚持把5 [: N- W' [. o' |3 Hfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; % E' G3 J% Q0 f b/ V9 j0 t5 N' jmso-font-kerning:0pt">“% N8 B) n0 X5 L$ G$ O/ rmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">五水共治2 s, L5 t2 r n% S7 h6 |; L% G% ]. M font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;# {6 K- g: N1 Y y* R8 ]" W9 g0 @' U mso-font-kerning:0pt">”, R* g Q2 k K1 Gmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">作为美丽乡村建设的' u6 l' v# I$ S5 Q" _+ |, Cfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;9 s- o/ v- l3 H mso-font-kerning:0pt">“! \/ q6 a4 Q) @# v e mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">主抓手; l6 y; d7 S0 T8 D- }font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;- u6 M+ G) m) B. F! r0 J; b( U& w mso-font-kerning:0pt">”- ]( o }3 {, o/ t# L mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农村人居环境持续改善。5 }& o& b2 ? u" @' G4 U font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; * T( R c2 D% v$ _mso-font-kerning:0pt">“' J0 r! U3 _! Y+ S0 e mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">全域治污( E" B) o6 o8 k1 L, s& @ R font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;* v# S& L9 _1 C4 I& a mso-font-kerning:0pt">”

+ S K% p4 p8 H4 a1 d3 _ 8 @2 [: }, t( c* e

0 e" a- i0 m8 n' E line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, S! A) A+ v9 \& |" E4 o3 S 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    1/ J, z. w+ z5 k5 S. [ 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、推进农村生活污水治理。" A; Y1 m- \4 F1 l3 ]5 D$ G4 c& mfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;' {/ x" Q! T6 \2 M+ `0 b mso-font-kerning:0pt">

' E6 z8 z; N, d: U' I % ?+ q) O3 F* a) Q3 J

4 h+ I/ ]; A2 y; O1 kline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 Y0 l" H+ |* A+ p: @# m( C' ? 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    2! F8 G2 M2 G6 w宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、做好农村面源污染整治。! z7 z0 p& }# U* M hfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;5 e8 Z8 f. K, N0 f mso-font-kerning:0pt">

2 {: D9 g1 i. u6 ]+ p0 }3 a2 v' Y

5 O7 r0 w) M+ u1 G7 Q* M1 `line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 p/ L( [: }" n* x$ r仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    31 }; p0 G b- F2 D5 o# m; j仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:/ K8 Y9 }: ]: L0 Z) B: N. p8 n1 n 宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、构建卫生长效管理机制。1 q8 o- s8 d: b2 o: K1 B7 ]7 v0 k; I+ ` 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

, ^' ?, Q! |5 i+ {$ w/ z+ ~0 @ ( J0 o1 u, J P; f/ ]& i

: s& i/ j& P9 Z- o. V line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 N7 C) p1 j" m q仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">  A) S! A, K5 W0 G9 H 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(三)坚持把惠农增收作为美丽乡村建设的4 j3 P% v' m- e font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;1 z; w" T$ A# l! r" ~* i) i, V mso-font-kerning:0pt">“1 a6 x& e! ?! zmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">出发点( ? k( ?' K/ h8 W$ s/ U# Mfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;! p3 x( c0 s; t+ c) A mso-font-kerning:0pt">”1 O# e% q0 F5 s/ Vmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农民生活水平不断提高。( [, k, K! c' b! k, ]3 K font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; 5 a [2 n C2 rmso-font-kerning:0pt">

+ K9 c0 O" _+ ]8 y* d6 K' \. Z ( p0 N7 H" i. q* w- ]/ B

. W) F, f- F7 g: B' f! m- jline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">0 c/ A$ O9 @6 c 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    1: H2 l. s F8 T6 R8 j宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、提高农民素质( P( v2 N5 ]5 R6 d4 u1 W7 F font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; + s( ]( y# e: _% B4 L/ b" M8 Qmso-font-kerning:0pt">

0 w2 {2 I' I2 w 1 I- w$ Q( `- }, b& @

2 n+ D! C( o* rline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- Z. C, `% N- t E, n: F# n- `- t仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    23 \: _+ T |2 E: p* D4 J7 B* S 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、发展现代农业。/ ]/ W6 K1 `0 u$ [font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;4 P9 X9 R, r$ g3 D+ T mso-font-kerning:0pt">

9 J7 c f* U) z6 ?1 M8 R 1 y5 T( l1 z2 V

; L5 ?2 B+ a tline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- S2 d+ s6 R/ }' O仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    3" v: y, R, G" a3 ^$ P( }: n& c宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、促进农民增收。3 c; x% r$ l/ V. x( Ffont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;* E5 B6 E7 {0 l9 [2 _& c mso-font-kerning:0pt">

. v' u+ y: u" c' g5 k 5 s _0 O1 |$ K& A8 f5 L3 m* P

, |% c/ f, X1 N) _" pline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">* d# c- S. m4 U3 O" J5 U仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">  - [' c6 n0 q. G( a/ w' t: b+ Q* G$ n% J# K 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">(四)坚持把民生保障作为美丽乡村建设的; @+ X, i4 o9 F" ~' Lfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; & ? }1 `0 ~# L5 Kmso-font-kerning:0pt">“” w1 M( G0 A7 umso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,农村社会不断和谐。6 K2 n, A) D- h5 @1 X font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;& |, E" }3 g2 A8 N8 u6 |) K9 N mso-font-kerning:0pt">

6 ?/ b+ h+ _2 O# p( J. m& Y* e# _) H ~) j

) o/ ^; b+ g' Y line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">, R6 D2 O" k% w+ t) }: A2 Y仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    13 ]3 p) D! }: @2 O: p2 W宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断优化公共服务。5 p4 K+ Q7 g& k- C4 W font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; + l9 J6 }( e" z' X; `9 R" X& |mso-font-kerning:0pt">

' f' a$ O( j3 |. n# b" Q% V 1 M! S) ~0 O+ i1 O

6 N6 X u" y. O$ V% e( H line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">4 N/ h9 D& r' l0 h- T2 e 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    2' N& b- [" {3 Q+ O D; V 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断繁荣乡村文化。8 f2 |" l/ T$ I( P+ @1 d: p font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;1 x! i7 Y6 F% C mso-font-kerning:0pt">

$ J: D) r* S# s/ O" _ : U$ j& A; c/ P4 L

4 w8 s7 I# k b3 @ line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">" b7 Z' C( Y% ~ 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    37 T- e/ }: d" J- u6 A1 w4 h 宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、不断完善社会管理。0 q% `& ?5 ?" x) h) r3 V. s" _ font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;+ I9 ?7 k1 J( X' n- q mso-font-kerning:0pt">

8 @$ L# H9 L- ?& G; l* t w2 b7 n9 W7 q( d$ w7 \2 l

& N+ R. p& z! `' }8 e& O! v$ zline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">6 W( I6 H% [2 R9 O) [5 A# X仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    : S2 m; i/ ?( @. m6 T宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">三、二次出发重实效,谱写' `" a) {" `. F+ [ font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;' H; D C8 T G mso-font-kerning:0pt">“. J6 ]: [8 ]3 q; q( [5 g" j mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">两美8 Q' \: h( U, R font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; # R* V3 O% U! b: u% }4 omso-font-kerning:0pt">”% h. Y0 T. ]* b, U' pmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">新篇章: ]! s( d. O% E4 A) l3 X* N font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;; z+ i0 s6 x2 |7 I2 e3 }+ X mso-font-kerning:0pt">

* \8 ?$ b9 g' ?+ J4 T) r) L* J 2 Z/ F: r+ D3 u

/ d+ G. l3 Q8 `* Z2 t line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">" }/ E1 x. n) b" d8 D8 e; Z3 ?3 M仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    1% P' X, H% P2 K# V" j, O宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、深化农村改革。; Y1 t2 S' r1 @* tfont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; / U9 i- ]% S& w& A7 J, w! J1 Dmso-font-kerning:0pt">

3 h- U3 s5 O8 P8 T2 n, B- S& d% J- A# N; o0 p( S

# L, G4 p# y8 g0 y0 Z9 r) `5 P line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' U; w( r+ m, V仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    21 f' g: I$ e6 h9 V0 l2 Z宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、做强农业产业。 o' ]- N4 q8 d$ m ffont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;9 u2 M! R$ M, n! j/ y' ^ mso-font-kerning:0pt">

2 D# Q! v" _ {9 C) g% U. t & z0 _* U2 F* c5 _; q- n8 T. O8 @

% b' `- h5 X B/ a1 j/ O$ X line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">2 u) g2 |% f% Y0 A5 D' J( U 仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    3/ F9 s( S2 d1 d宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、推进农村治理。, b0 C) f$ W: X1 Ffont-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;- U' W+ f6 W$ Q7 P mso-font-kerning:0pt">

* ~3 D' g. s y ; l8 R4 d& S6 n. q4 I

* n" E6 E1 w) B6 F' Eline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"> X- S3 | h* G. y仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">    4; D' L( Q: r' R3 a宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">、确保农民实惠。. [+ |+ v9 O1 L0 b8 l% o0 t8 ?font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; ) z& H! h6 f2 Kmso-font-kerning:0pt">

+ P1 J9 U# l! k7 ?, M8 `" E7 J6 b0 D; z* t# F8 q+ w

% h& F8 S8 i* w+ [1 u t) W" lline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; P0 W5 P1 E+ e 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:# @( o* R( N; b* D; m" n 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:, k Q0 R& k( n, Y3 g! |: V$ j! }mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">一级标题可以不动,二级标题提炼修改一下吧。主体产业是什么呢?* n; T* n" }+ l0 L3 ]% i+ N mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

( X" W+ t: a; x8 h1 f : c A* R3 X ~$ @

1 F2 J/ c+ ?" Z- H! cline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">. O1 Q1 g6 T F' [+ F8 Q14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:% ?+ Q: [& D- E# A; J P 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:& z" |- a p/ f: Z6 Q7 ]6 d7 S mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">产村联动促增收。坚持建设与发展并重,因地制宜做到美丽乡村建设与产业项目发展并举。一是整合特色产业。根据不同的区位优势、产业基础和发展趋势,规划产业布局,整合产业资源,大力发展专业市场,壮大村集体经济。如古山镇大园东村依托发达的废旧钢铁产业,引导周边2 X8 r- ?4 m& j. e$ H0 Rmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">5+ k# G9 H1 j$ v 14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: ! N. R5 l$ d5 j; }5 }# D Q宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个自然村向中心村集聚,建成了拥有8 w7 a% G' c0 V% V) D2 ? mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">533: G" G% ~$ k% L4 m* f7 j: \$ M+ O 14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:4 b& _/ q! j) E; u5 r5 _8 p& P 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个摊位的废旧钢铁市场,村集体经济年收入) U/ P' M2 h+ `5 w mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">1000- f. C' e2 Z7 b; L/ E4 ]6 r% u mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多万元。二是发展物业经济。针对区位优势明显的村,通过农村集体建设用地开发和项目建设,盘活土地,投资发展集体物业项目。如城西新区小东陈村,通过与相邻2 u( Y# p& |2 T6 u* Y2 x mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">4% u% z* Q5 x1 F14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: $ A( Q# @( N, G2 A宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">个村联合建立五星社区,集聚人口( [/ T5 B5 y& B! f. \ mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">2500$ a( h" T! u( e$ ^% u4 o8 K# B' pmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多人,盘活建设用地9 |' X3 I; |2 M8 u; h' Fmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">29% U# H5 f, L: t+ D0 R14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: ) I1 S9 u) T: v' e1 ~1 P5 j& B宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">万平方米,建设城西物流中心,实现村民、企业、环境的6 H b0 {' ?8 H, ]- g; H2 c s mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“) @5 f! N: i, Q0 f. x14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:, B6 R8 p/ A \* ` i9 z6 }+ ?+ r4 b 宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">多赢- B( j0 _6 S7 N1 x# h+ _mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">”% U0 P3 V& I1 I- x; l 14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: $ _5 `; I5 ~. _宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">。 ^2 J$ b+ w- J& ^7 |mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

+ G% f7 }% d/ c$ d9 Y& d) p- ]4 p# ~; ]

! |8 [! q4 }) J6 a line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' r: ?, U5 \; B, A" O6 h$ F- q14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:/ Y5 V3 C% Q4 L 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌6 ^+ e2 t8 d) A mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">:一般正文里不用一是二是三是的吗?# K4 _" P" M" j3 J: A! `mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

0 z: H" j4 L$ O* x; ~8 q/ c; o $ ^+ \ H5 k: V6 W+ p& b

0 v* p: p' R- C: W. {line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">9 {" v) z' \7 W4 \14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 7 c5 [- |# j) U楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:7 b- G# ~: {' s6 ?mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">用是可以用,问题不在这里。这个材料感觉像是工作总结,挂了个美丽乡村的头,较牵强。& s- q% E' x6 |" l+ }mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

& ~) C# @: @, t 2 j2 g% r9 b. O

2 d/ B l; I" W( bline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">. s* E" S6 z9 S0 d7 x5 I; {. Z 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:" f1 T; n+ Z$ z; L# ?, \ \% o; b 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌: V# b' n1 p# [mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">那没有,美丽乡村建设也包括这些内容的,而不仅仅是村庄整治。# c [3 A$ b, l; N; c2 `mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

2 @% {% ^0 e- Z * W8 {# b" X9 i# y4 @! x: H

4 r2 w# `9 [1 g# B: p+ ~* Jline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ |" t1 J6 | f/ S1 f# J 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:7 M9 ^! E& K8 q+ D2 K 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:8 w! A3 e9 ^0 Y$ E X k mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我不是这个意思,美丽乡村汇报也好,生态乡村汇报也好,这些内容都可以用。一个汇报材料第一是基本情况,第二是对于创建活动本身的相关情况汇报,第三是做法,第四适当点点问题。当然,问题也可以根据实际情况不点。至于你的措施,应该是结合本情况来的。而且此提纲里,做法没有必要分这么多层次,容易造成逻辑上的混乱。你先要明确出这么几个重点。比如,要说转型,你想表达的转型是什么转型,怎么转型,转出什么成效,结合美丽乡村落到优化产业结构上比较好。* d r* [1 v1 p8 g+ B! fmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

; |% } J) C' v1 y3 F 7 d4 f. U+ b" S. w1 N% k0 f5 y

' M, z6 @/ r; j* r- \line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- \+ N6 [- L, o" i' ^. J$ u 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:- V! z K2 h9 ]1 ^- W& i 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:! Z. a6 j% H1 {4 W! ]- ^0 imso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我内容太多了是嘛?+ U: Y8 q$ N1 R: ]( R2 P4 qmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

( a, \) o, J& Y; b* W 1 H: _2 N5 e; U

' a# A+ V" y* L% [ line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">% L- o, g: W* i' e9 z* F0 U14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: * B$ r9 z) @/ p, b楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:# F# S2 p& [: W, K- G" i/ F. gmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">不是多,是乱了。我看完的体会是包罗万象,但具体内容看完却记不住多少。/ z' O( u" h3 T6 w; X* b mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

4 k7 c2 a9 \4 G O/ T3 ~" Z * m2 e+ `5 ~" q

, q: Y/ `" N5 {4 V, } line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">: D9 P1 C, F7 V) u14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: " D! R( X" h0 j& N楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪:1 C$ w8 J. W& |5 d" U mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">层次可以简化,什么都想说,太杂了。. ~1 x6 i5 D+ u3 X; o) m mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

: R- ]( L$ y+ T & F" s5 e- a% D# }: X/ m" w

3 R; w' a9 W1 I line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">; ?& G- E; B- W0 s7 f* s. r1 a% V 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:4 Q* `9 D6 E5 d$ J+ c 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:5 a7 f' b& l! X8 J* J mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">不过不是不能说,要理顺一下。举个例子来说,就用猫总凝练的题目(一)坚持把转型强村作为美丽乡村建设的! R6 ]7 T( ^) W% {, e mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">“! _- ?% s% y! f7 P0 G6 w% l1 k4 H 14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: 8 A3 F7 Y9 V) Z' `4 y( \% v9 C宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">重头戏9 T5 ~- {- K" Q5 o1 ^2 o* V6 f mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">” k% o" ?( I0 }! n8 F3 c14.0pt;font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family: 6 p! {4 I8 u3 ~& Q: X. p- L宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">,乡村发展水平有效提升。这个标题要写,要明确围绕的中心是转型强村。效果是乡村发展水平。对应转型强村找内容。( C f- h% {0 Z) u: Q4 gmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

( B9 i* d2 C& h* p1 s8 d# ^3 e! z6 d # f( }4 p4 e0 u

/ c2 m/ g0 u* N( B5 C y8 { line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">- U$ I# j2 ?, y9 Z2 d" H% l9 e' Q 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: $ J" Q/ D5 C4 k7 w1 U楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:& ]! b4 k4 z1 a/ Vmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">那我把内容归纳一下,第二部分就点明五六点重点内容。! E: N" |, i3 e5 a0 G$ q mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

B t/ u+ b& y2 o+ n1 w# S- A, _+ y. A# T4 `/ S

5 B# A- V: V" J, u( N9 B* [- x8 `+ T line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"># N/ {+ g: a9 w5 K7 ^6 e3 j) k14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:* |8 [0 s- }2 k! f( O 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:$ h7 x' }" |; q2 f, \6 x mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">内容不在于多少,要说出亮点与特色。大家都在创建,为什么选你。因为你创建的有成效,亮点多,做法新。/ L2 q7 {% N% L! ~4 dmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

& x% ^3 O$ J6 \) B# W , f$ W4 m P$ I! E4 w

. ?# G, ]0 G {* Z' X9 c/ j* \5 i: Uline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">$ G! H" E; y' t" ]14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:; R# `) x* e7 m1 M; }2 |& m) a4 ~ 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪:( K1 E0 c$ } J) ] ]+ o: }/ Amso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">这也有点像二元标题。$ I/ W% A/ s7 l" k8 p mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

" d8 h2 o( }: D% q6 l- B4 \) Q7 Q) r ( n4 D" d# }5 L( J

7 a S) L8 X$ v1 T, l0 Iline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">. h, z7 V* c& S7 U9 X. a; ? 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:3 l V0 { V* L% W- y5 }( k$ Y 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬30:+ {. @- T. d! w" P( Z8 d, r font-family:宋体;mso-fareast-font-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;/ M. A! S, m! ~6 D mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 39" O) @% T" q9 k! p( q9 \2 V$ q' ` mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体; 2 @' q# s- [7 f4 m5 qmso-font-kerning:0pt">号同学你这是典型的观点加事迹的写法,要把材料融会贯通,并从中提炼观点。3 Z! B, s2 q/ V% O. I0 Pmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

: l' v0 h- i( \% d% N 9 ?+ q5 b+ z3 Y" [- g8 e4 y

3 [1 j0 k9 \4 Q$ D Y2 o line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">& o5 ~' s ~" U% Yfont-family:仿宋_GB2312;mso-ascii-font-family:宋体;mso-hansi-font-family:宋体; , }7 }: h+ {' smso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我发表一下个人的想法,有以下几个方面的建议:一是老秘并不了解学员工作的具体环境和具体情况,如果要这样一对一的修改,是需要花费一些时间慢慢对接的;二是就本文来说存在一些逻辑问题,可能是在撰稿之初就犯了一些逻辑性错误,观点(小标题)是根据内容提炼出来的,而本文的小标题对仗工整,乍一看给人的感觉是比较好,但一看内容就有点文不对题了。例如:第一部分,作为乡级政府谈何政策支持?乡镇有制定政策的权限吗?' H& c! \3 f( o4 W6 F mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

4 A) q/ d' l2 A k 0 j: }$ t. q! E& R

# M1 r. Y8 L( N& Zline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">( B* p$ v) C, _& [ 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 0 Y2 D9 @- y) c0 x0 G6 I楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:9 _8 d, @' `0 W8 b) gmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">我们是县级市,不是乡镇。1 l: N# Q g, G( k2 k' smso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

* k* e7 k* k: A6 s! [! n 9 O3 \8 a- J5 z7 X* D' z

/ b/ @2 ~7 \& Q& W% W line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 {9 N+ |- f3 A' o 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: ) K3 F. F$ X0 b! n5 H" q1 v2 z9 I楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">北纬30度: T. V: W0 j% i) B# m mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">县级,包括地市级都没有制定政策的权限,都是贯彻落实上级的政策。此外,从文章的提纲看,二级标题不能囊括内容。% H8 k$ H7 ?& P mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

: ~7 X, D7 ~ H( A& }- b' `) ~2 b

+ ?% G8 e, u4 _4 m1 P# Dline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">! } u: _% u8 _ 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:7 h$ j( {6 r7 \: E1 [ 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">胡晓斌:4 f6 C, k, P7 f* Z& [1 \( y# _ mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">县级市应该有制定本县美丽乡村建设实施意见和考核标准、政策支持等权力的吧。二级标题与子标题脱节。. W5 J0 z5 ^, }7 f1 K1 v" x; C mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

+ R8 a2 G f- b9 K0 A' g I6 H- S : m& b/ h8 ~* I, V' c" s

% K; k$ }; Z" @7 f8 yline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">1 Q4 Z( w* l2 j. J Z7 K, u14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:. i5 ?1 u) n# P4 b1 J 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:/ l! O" T7 y- a# a2 P8 y mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">即便乡镇没有制定政策的权限,但也可以出台一些举措,比如以奖代补,纳入考核。这些可以归入政策层面。7 C/ p) N' k0 i/ t7 B6 Hmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

- `# d% L4 h; b- |% s9 }1 ^& Q9 K+ J : z$ K6 n6 N' w. y) J2 z% W

. Y6 v: C, S k- i0 j* i" r/ F line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' s" q' k3 V3 { M5 N& W0 V: h8 S) W 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:% T8 i1 D( B. _( k8 T1 u4 W 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪:, |. m5 p4 L8 U5 B: k6 a3 C' g0 Amso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">对,这个问题我同意。而且这也不是核心问题。核心问题可能还是逻辑架构上。我觉得晓斌对转型可能没有理解透。4 S$ N# v( J I, \6 Smso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

3 r( |( N- Q8 @ t+ a + N+ k4 f* k; l1 U$ H0 ~8 R

* W( G4 X0 q" g/ z& b; M line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">" i3 a2 i( Q4 R14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 9 _/ Y* g6 G2 W/ p# D" O楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">石子云:5 g j7 _- E; I" Dmso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">@39) i1 l/ N: {0 h L mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">号同学胡晓斌. d& b; ~# R- w, e1 \9 J7 O) R! rmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">——剖析材料的写法。" e/ S. ?. c9 ~& Y* ]5 [mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

% z* r, K G% O: W S0 ^ * J' a! a6 t; T) Q4 Y

6 b7 ^5 j3 K$ \* e: t line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">$ n: v& D' D# o' K14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: & w) D' B v7 f8 `4 r c楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">指尖绚烂:4 V6 L4 D; `& F7 O& k% r, A5 ]mso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">这篇六大点,有点多,整合下。, N: e& j2 a* D. r& h- b* G) T/ p mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

6 w, L. [& a, E- v : J1 s" [! T: O m9 r* v. A4 m

" p* z* @3 u( O line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">" E; w0 q- v7 S& }mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 

, R2 J( E B x: t2 c }) ~# ]( m$ L1 G% t

& N% B V& T/ c2 C/ r mso-line-height-rule:exactly">) A" [" B: s2 x W3 Y mso-hansi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;mso-bidi-font-family:方正小标宋简体;color:black;! U8 s6 d, G5 f/ R" m& z9 P mso-font-kerning:0pt">二、列提纲、明思路$ i% \6 ^6 v: b5 [14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: 5 z0 z) ~0 B- k* `3 B2 x2 A楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

6 g9 B; N9 G- ^! h# p4 U2 ^ 0 P8 |& m7 C9 Z3 V7 P5 p; b

/ h1 c; u' Y6 R; N/ y; Y) S( G/ U7 V line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' @1 g5 o3 h8 H5 q M4 H mso-bidi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt"> 

) U# q! E% m/ k9 S# y9 L( q }: O 2 ^( e" j" { F7 [2 J& C

7 o) o- N! s% z, q0 Z line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ ^$ ^# D+ Y* u6 P3 Z14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: $ R2 z/ F% H9 f3 s8 L. ?# q9 b6 n楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:* u9 l( R1 |$ h" e/ |$ ?, Bmso-hansi-font-family:宋体;mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">在刚才讨论的基础上,我想谈一谈关于列提纲的一点体会。我所理解的提纲就是动笔之前想好的内容,材料的骨架,也是我们通常所说的谋篇布局。! t2 D7 y/ \8 [& F mso-bidi-font-family:宋体;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

5 z1 G% P! ?( Z7 Q ! h4 C2 {3 A; }- z0 j, w8 j, v x

) G/ h& _# s5 | gline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">/ N& O+ v, S" {9 \* N, n" V5 S3 K2 f 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:: Q9 k- W6 a- C$ X/ G 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">

游客,如果您要查看本帖隐藏内容请回复

$ S- }$ I3 j% f, c* {) Y2 o( A i' M1 Sline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">

. E! V0 _/ Q! E9 c4 w. [& W# j " e& d# U$ z$ Z7 l" L( k5 { l

8 P/ g9 ?+ M& h% K0 y$ b& O$ h$ Rline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">& E8 l$ n/ \3 [ m! `2 i% K 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: ! N4 U! z& H) y* z0 X楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">端方:如果反过来,写加强社区制度建设,对93向社区制度进行梳理,非常平,看不出什么特色与亮点来。

/ i. ?9 T- A5 f; {" m% | 7 Q. d) T7 ~5 h" {6 v

" U- v+ S: r5 z1 n5 g! Qline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">( h: l8 G+ X. t& X) C14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:5 e) f/ S% X7 R8 q3 O( e8 A' [6 n" ~2 D 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">铁树凝:需求为王,刨树刨根,循此,深挖,梳理片段,轮廓,佐以素材,碰撞,修正思路,揉融观点素材,思路为纲,纲举目张,终是符合有关要求,才算好。

0 v. |( C' W0 Q. v - w% w! ]; ~% L4 }/ t/ C! X

4 ~- m3 O! h( @9 z line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">7 _, R8 w; O- y6 Y. q) S" B14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family:5 O: {# V+ H P8 G: U 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">飘雪:总之写作很难,难在何处,之一是思维。

! P% X6 L4 L; f5 A5 s + B% Z, f# t6 v

7 H1 K& a1 B r' d: u$ J$ }* r line-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly">' l- U& J7 v. D# W 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: L0 w& |$ c: m: h 楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">铁树凝:难在先方有可贵后生!思路素材之间有一碰撞修正过程不是一成不变的,中间很多时候有变化。

; P0 ~( u/ D8 U% W" Q7 t4 ]/ u9 E8 M" t P0 s& y

7 j' I2 V9 u5 }+ w4 Q1 p2 a- Z' pline-height:30.0pt;mso-line-height-rule:exactly"> g5 L. Y4 n% g& p6 a0 H d/ b 14.0pt;font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-hansi-font-family:楷体_GB2312;mso-bidi-font-family: . d/ X( M0 i" F/ w& w楷体_GB2312;color:black;mso-font-kerning:0pt">老猫:好标题的灵感从哪里来?老猫的体会是从段落内容中提炼,从个别字词中联想,从上级文件中生发,从参考资料中化用,从交流碰撞中偶得。

 

精彩评论115

正序浏览
usb000 发表于 2014-8-18 23:09:09 | 显示全部楼层
 
公文写作百法例讲
每次只有等到12点左右才能静下心来,分享你们的疑惑和感悟,期待早日加入你们。
 
甘肃小秘 发表于 2014-8-19 09:56:21 | 显示全部楼层
 
老秘网虚拟稿费
标题分两部分,前半部分亮手段(做法),后半部分凸显成效。
 
beijiguang 发表于 2014-8-19 11:11:45 | 显示全部楼层
 
专业写文章
案例与论述结合,讲得比较到位,学习了。
 
zxb 发表于 2014-8-19 22:35:44 | 显示全部楼层
 
材料的骨架,也是我们通常所说的谋篇布局
 
毛迎新 发表于 2014-8-20 18:16:41 | 显示全部楼层
 
学习中,应该早点报到,长知识了。谢谢
 
墨家青木宇 发表于 2014-8-21 09:03:28 | 显示全部楼层
 
看得迷迷糊糊,自家水平太洼,跟着学习下
 
逸风 发表于 2014-8-21 09:15:58 | 显示全部楼层
 
刚才讨论的基础上,我想谈一谈关于列提纲的一点体会。我所理解的提纲就是动笔之前想好的内容,材料的骨架,也是我们通
 
杨雯 发表于 2014-8-21 09:57:31 | 显示全部楼层
 
讨论的很精彩,而且都是提到点子上的,值得学习
 
Sundy. 发表于 2014-8-21 10:51:01 | 显示全部楼层
 
刚刚大学毕业,初入职场,来向前辈们学习一下。
 
您需要登录后才可以回帖 登录 | 立即注册

本版积分规则


1关注

6粉丝

35帖子

排行榜
作者专栏

关注我们:微信订阅号

官方微信公众号

客服个人微信号

全国服务热线:

0595-22880819

公司地址:泉州秘途文化传媒有限公司

运营中心:福建省泉州市

Email:506070961#qq.com

Copyright   ©2015-2025  老秘网 责任编辑:释然Powered by©Discuz!技术支持:秘途文化  备案号   ( 闽ICP备19022590号-1 闽公网安备35050302000919号 )